The Pipe problem
It was horrible the water just kept gushing out, all over the brand new carpet. What could we do? My mum decided to ring the fire service.
They arrived within 15 minutes, it just kept going. Water was even coming out of the front door and onto the street. The fire service decided to jump on the roof and try to find where the water was coming from, they took multiple of the roof tiles off and eventually found a leak. There was a big split in one of the pipes so they went to the water main and flicked the switch to stop the water from going everywhere. Luckily no one was hurt.
how did they see the pipe on the roof.
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ReplyDeleteA really nice descriptive piece! You turn a description about a water leak into a well put together story. I particularly like the part where the firemen come, and of course the happy ending. Good use of punctuation and grammar, especially your use of commas and full stops. Perhaps you could extend the ending, and perhaps explain how the leak came to be, or even experiment with other types of punctuation. Keep up the good work!
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