Sunday 25 June 2017

Morgan 100WC WK 7

                            100 word challenge Image result for dark hallway

I'm trying to find way through the pitch dark hallway. The only thing i had to find her was her bellow screaming. Her screaming got louder and louder. Eventually I found her lying in a bed. She screamed, “help me.” I urgently asked her, “what was wrong?” The only reply i got was, “it hurts.” I quickly but carefully picked her up and fast walked through the hallway and out to my rundown truck. I carefully laid her in the two back seats. Then i ran to my drivers seat and drove as quickly as i could to the hospital.  
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  1. Anonymous17 August 2017 at 19:38

    I really like the scene and vocabulary it shows you put a lot of effort into writing it just be aware where you need to put capital letters.

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