Tuesday, 20 June 2017
Matthew 100wc wk8
We were all on the construction site when like a meteor a brown object came crashing down on the earth.When we got to it it smashed in half revealing white and orange goo to fall out.It’s surface was hard and thick and so was the goo.When Jeff stood on the white goo he found it was he didn’t fall right through it.They saw it was a egg shaped object and the goo reminded them of egg yolk.Bob proceeded to put down road cones around it for no reason at all.Suddenly the egg blew up.
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