Tuesday 6 June 2017
Matthew wk6
Matthew stayed with his father in Hamilton for a week.Matthew was a 11 yr old boy and was enjoying his school holiday.Matthew has a brother named Callum and a sister named Blanche.His father was at work so Matthew was left with Callum.Callum made him do the dishes by hand,but matthew wanted to watch his favorite show so at the ad break so he turned on the tap and went when he came back the sink overflowed he turned off the tap but the water just kept gushing out with no stop he called callum but...
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