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I like staring at the starry sky at night, especially when it's a rough storm. Sitting by the fire with a nice hot chocolate is a joy. At our house we all snuggle up on the comfy couch by the cheerful fire. Its one of my most treasured memories. In the flash of lightning I saw bright blue streaks in the night sky. I love thunder and lightning it makes me feel cozy. That's what I think when someone mentions winter. Even with the noise of the rain splattering on the windows I think it gives me a great sleep.
By Rosie
I like staring at the starry sky at night, especially when it's a rough storm. Sitting by the fire with a nice hot chocolate is a joy. At our house we all snuggle up on the comfy couch by the cheerful fire. Its one of my most treasured memories. In the flash of lightning I saw bright blue streaks in the night sky. I love thunder and lightning it makes me feel cozy. That's what I think when someone mentions winter. Even with the noise of the rain splattering on the windows I think it gives me a great sleep.
By Rosie
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