Sunday 18 June 2017
Benji ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ T2W8
"Beep Beep Beep Beep" John smashes the alarm, jumping in his orange vest ready to get to the scene. "hiss" the walkie-talkie went urrr , we have reports of a milk spill 642 row" John jumped in his fire truck arriving quickly to the scene. there were already a couple of police cars at the site and a worker at chocolate co had been trapped under chocolate and needed a life out. john and his team got in the fire ladder and got the chocolate off him. they went back to the station and celebrated with a nice warm hot chocolate.
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