Thursday, 22 June 2017
Max 100wc T2W8
While Jim and Frankie were working a giant chocolate egg appeared out of nowhere and landed right next to them. So they decided to close the site for the day while they examined the egg. While they were examining the egg jim decided to crack the egg open and inside they found the easter bunny. Jim and Frankie thought to themselves estar was yesterday so what is he doing. But then the easter bunny jumped super high then started throwing out easter eggs. Then Jim thought to himself i wonder why the easter bunny is doing this for us.
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