The Storm
I didn’t know that it would be this hard to make a speech for my Nana’s funeral, all I could think about was her last words she said to me. I took a deep breath, I blinked back my tears, I new that I needed to be strong. I looked out the window the sky was dark as coal, Then all of a sudden the sky made a big Bang!. Then to follow the bang a big flash of lightning came. In the flash of lightning I heard my Nana say ‘don’t be sad I will always be with you’.
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