Sunday 11 June 2017

Bradley 100WC T2W6

An Unlucky Day


It all started well, walking out the door, homework done, smile on my face. I was waiting for the bus which eventually came. I was walking into class when it struck me - my back was damp! Like lightning I opened my bag to check what was up - my water bottle was leaking, the water just kept gushing out, and my homework now ruined, It was all I had. I was anxious, obviously, I got an F and detention. The rest of the day was average. Because of detention, I missed the school bus so I had to walk home alone.
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