100 word challenge 
I'm trying to find way through the pitch dark hallway the only thing i had to find was her bellow screaming and the her screaming got louder and louder eventually found her lying in a bed she screamed help me i urgently asked her what was wrong? the only reply i got was it hurts i quickly but carefully picked her up and fast walked through the hallway and out to my rundown truck i carefully laid her in the two back seats then i ran to my drivers seat and drove as quickly as i could to the hospital.
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