Dear Andrew
I believe you are the most kindest and generous person in Sierra Leone. If I was put in your position, the pressure would get to me, I don’t know how you do it. Do you ever see your friends and family? I strongly believe the resources you need for your work should be given to you instantly, like the solar lights! What has been the hardest situation to deliver a baby. The hours you put in must be a huge commitment. I understand your job must not be the easiest, we are here to help out.
From Izzy
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