Monday 13 November 2017

Connor 100WC T4 W5

A man wearing a heavy army jacket, a pullover wool cap and dark sunglasses walked into the First American Bank at the corner of Maple and Main streets in downtown Short Beach.
The man walked up to the teller and held up a hand grenade for all to see. He said, "Give me all your money, all the money in this bank, right now!"Everyone in the lobby screamed and started running, even the security guard. Nervously, the young female teller handed the man three big bags loaded with cash. He walked out the door. A second later, he came back in and said I want more but then proceeded to whisper under his breath but where would we hide it all?

2 comments:

  1. I really like your story, maybe next time remember punctuation.

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  2. I really liked your story.
    I really enjoyed the story line.
    It had great descriptive words and a great ending.
    Next time check for punctuation

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