Tuesday 14 November 2017

Ashton 100WC T4 W5

I grabbed my face mask and slowly put it on. Once I had put it on I walked into the store and grabbed my pistol out of my belt and held it up and took a shot into the ground. I heard screams from the other side of the store and people running all over the place. I screamed " give me your food now!" and all of a sudden a bag came out of nowhere and landed right in front of me. I grabbed It and ran, I ran for my life. I then thought but where would I hide it all? 
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  1. Anonymous14 November 2017 at 20:41

    Great story ashton i like the action maybe next time think about explaining the character more.

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