Thursday, 2 November 2017

100wc w3 t4 jordon


Tomorrow I am going to the water park for my birthday i’m so excited i went to bed but could not sleep. It was finally morning i get into my swimming trunks and hoped into the car and trove of. We arrived at the water park it was cold with white fog everywhere we got in and celebrated after got to blow out the flame of the candle it was a fun but we had to leave the park and go home. Well it was fun well it lasted.well at least I got some good gifts to play with.

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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous15 November 2017 at 20:12

    Entertaining story Jordan, just remember to use capital I's!

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  2. Anonymous15 November 2017 at 21:54

    I liked your story but next time check that it makes sense ( hoped into the car and trove of ) it should be I hopped into the car and drove off...

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  3. Anonymous29 November 2017 at 21:35

    Nice story Jordon! Maybe next time use capital I's

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