I was eating my yummy sandwich that I had made earlier.
As I went to take a bit of my sandwich my phone rang.
I went to answer it but my battery died before I could.
I put my sandwich down to try and fix my phone.
Then out of the corner of my eye a gorgeous white
dog leaped out as energetic as ever and stole my sandwich.
I hurried after it but after awhile I gave up. It was no use,
I could never get my sandwich back. I packed up all of
my stuff and went home.
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