Tuesday 7 November 2017

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Ghost Town

Ghost Town is a humble little town in London, England well almost there is a special way to get there. Inside a nice clothing shop called Pink’s which is owned by a lovely young lady who has more of a big job than you think, she has to make sure all the ghost people get through safely with no one noticing their opaque appearance. The way to get through to Ghost Town is to go into the changing room and there is an invisible portal into Ghost Town where all the ghosts run free and be with their own kind.

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