It was a few years ago now when I was walking in
the park at night, there was no one to be seen
or heard. Then out of nowhere a lightning bolt
threw itself from the sky, I tried to dodge it but it was
too late, It hit me. From that day on I have been
here in the park as a statue. Heaps of people
wonder how this statue got here. No one will ever
know that there is really a person inside of the
statue that’s me I can hear and see everything
they do or say.
Sunday, 19 November 2017
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Wow! There is something quite tragic about the man in the statue, I haven't seen anyone do this yet. That was until- instead of then out of nowhere, might sound better.
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