Wednesday 8 November 2017

100WC T4 W4 Jordi



Brain washed by our screens. We never see things as clearly as it truly is. We have to ask ourselves do I see everything I’m meant to see. For example The blurry shadows we think are just our imaginations. Well no, I know you're gonna think I’m crazy but ghosts, they are real and I’m gonna prove it. I have photographic proof of the  ghosts. Although there’s no possible way to take a clear photo of a ghost, I have a blurry photo of the ghosts. When you just stop staring at your devises and look around you’ll find out.

1 comment:

  1. Good Story Jordi, there are just some spelling mistakes like 'devises' is actually spelt like 'devices'. I like how you used 'Brain washed by screens' because it hooks the reader in the story. Maybe next time use some descriptive language and just give the reader some hints as to what the story is supposed to be.

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