Monday 16 October 2017

Lui 100wc T4 W1


There was once an old family that had just bought a new house in texas. One quiet night The parents heard a loud scream that sounded like it came from a female. The next They went for their daily walk to find a large swamp with a girls legs just reaching the surface of the water. The man grabbed a stick and poked the pair of legs. There was no movement so he dropped the stone. As soon as the rock dropped below the water there was a loud scream the same one as the night before the the legs got pulled under the water. After that day no one ever saw that couple ever again.

2 comments:

  1. Nice horror story I liked how you set the scene in Texas , except Texas needs a capital letter because it is a place.

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  2. Cool story Lui like how it was thrilling, But you put random capital letter in the middle of a sentence.

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