The detectors were completely shocked. A body stabbed and left head first in a polluted lake, tied down with a boat anchor.
“Three stabs to the torso, hanging upside-down. Not a single trace of fingerprints or blood or any physical evidence of the suspect, and no definite motive but it is known the victim owed money to a loan-shark” The scene was packed full of police officers and detectives taking notes and calling in specialists.
When the DNA traces came in a man named “Douglas Thomas” was a prime match-up. It was found that he did the murder.
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ReplyDeleteReally likes your story Benji! I liked the way you write your story about something interesting and hooked the reader in well. Perhaps next time you could use some more descriptive words to explain the scene a little more.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you described the scene, just remember to use different words at the start of sentences.
ReplyDeleteI really like the story. Maybe next time you could use some more descriptive words when describing what happened to the person.
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