Thursday 19 October 2017

grace wilson

So i was just at the Lake looking at the water and i started to think . " could i do a hand stand in the water or would I just fall over ? " So I sat there for a while wondering. Thinking. Then i thought why not jump in to the lake head fist and try land on my hands. So off i went to find i nice spot to jump in to . Then i rolled my sleeves up . Before oi knew it i was in the air flying down to the water . I don't know if it   was because i thought about jumping in the lake for so long? or because i'm actually jumping in the freezing lake in the middle of winter , but it felt like i was going in slow motion towards the water. I felt my hands touch the soft sand and then i felt my clod blue lips smile under the water as i had just done a hand stand underwater.

1 comment:

  1. Funny story grace, interesting concept. Just remember to use Capital I during a sentence.

    - Izzy

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