Matt was playing up on the hill with his sisters Sarah and Belinda. It was a beautiful day in the sunshine when they saw the most peculiar mark on the luscious green grass. On that hot, summery day, they saw two massive footprints in the grass. Matt hastily pulled off his shoe to compare it to the footprint. It was about half the size! Matt’s feet were quite big for his age. They all stood there brainstorming theories of how the footprint got there. Of course someone could of just dug the hole for fun, but why ruin the story.
Wednesday 6 September 2017
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Entertaining story rosie, next time remember to use more descriptive speech.
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