One summer in 1966, Tim and Taylor Simmonds went camping. In the woods, they saw many plants and animals they could not see in their neighborhood. They also saw something quite unusual.
Tim and Taylor were playing near their campsite. They saw something move in the trees. It was a giant, furry figure. It looked like it was watching them. Tim stepped closer to get a better look, but Taylor pulled him back. We hid behind a rock so the giant couldn’t see us, Because now he was standing about five metres away from us. Lucky for us he walked right past us leaving a massive footprint about 10 times the size of mine….
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