I was on my way to school with my friend Lisa.
We decided to walk to school today. So we cut
through a massive grassy field for a short cut.
As we walked along we saw a shorter patch of
grass. We walked over to see what was there.
There were two massive footprints, it looked like
a giant's footprint. We looked at each other
in wonder. I was thinking to myself that it was
entirely impossible. We then felt the sky turn
dark quickly. We looked up and there standing
right over top of us was a huge giant.
Tuesday, 5 September 2017
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I really enjoyed your story Madison. It was well thought out and well written. I really like some of e language you chose like "entirely impossible". It's a real cliff hanger. Maybe for your next 100 word challenge you'll write what happens with the giant. I'd live to read that !
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