Sunday, 17 September 2017
Izzy 100WC T3W9
It felt like slow motion, as the colourful balls splattered across the grey washed concrete. I didn’t know what to do they held a serious chemical called Tabun, that was extremely deadly. If the ball was to open it would release a high death risk liquid that could possibly kill you (if touched the inside). I tried to collect them up before they were spread across the gulley. One of the balls were broken and was spreading the fluid chemical through the alley. I was concerned that people would near and possibly die with my silly mistake haunting me forever.
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I'm just testing what happens to comments as a Team 100 member keep trying but cannot see them.
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