Tuesday 12 September 2017

Max 100wc T3W8


Frank and Jim lived in Canada. One day they went on holiday to go to England. While they were in England they meet Nick Crompton and they became best friends. When they were leaving just before Frank and Jim asked so, what lies ahead of you do you reckon you're going to keep raping or will you just stop raping. But before he could answer Jim and Frank had to hop on the plane to go back to Canada. Back at canada they really missed Nick so they moved to England so they didn't have to fly over every year.

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