Sunday, 17 September 2017

Corbin 100WC T3W9

Sponge Bob square pants, Sponge Bob square pants, Sponge Bob square pants argh. I love this program it’s so funny. Boom Crash Smack what was that. I turn around to see a big glass thing that’s on the ground. I screamed in horror. There were big beads on the ground to that looked like rocks. They looked so colourful pink, blue, yellow and green. I didn't even care about my TV, When that was the best thing in my life. But it’s not now because it’s destroyed. I called the investigators to see what they can find. But they didn't answer.

 

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