Sunday, 17 September 2017

Jordi 100WC T3 W9

Candy lightbulb

On the rainiest days, when the sun is weak and the wind is strong. You may be wanting something sweet to brighten up your day. Many years ago someone made and hid a candy light bulb for someone to enjoy in the future. I know it sounds super weird. But there is such thing and it tastes amazing. Ever thought about a light bulb filled with the sweetest candy you could ever imagine. Well if you want and you believe in it. you can try to find it. Good luck because you will get a big sugar rush.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Jordi, well done on your 100 word challenge. I like the way you have used your imagination and asked the reader questions to make them think about your story. I think hunting for and finding a candy filled light bulb sounds like great fun! Keep up the great work. (Team 100, Wellington)

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  2. I really liked your story because of how you used really good descriptive words and thought outside of the box with your story line. I also liked how you asked the reader questions but remember to put question marks at the end of your questions.

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