Tuesday 5 September 2017

🖤 Poppy's 100WC T3W7

I was walking through a field of hay on a beautiful sunny day with my friend, Mia, when we came to a large brown patch of dirt. We looked around and tried to figure out what the shape was, it took us a while to find out that it was a huge foot print. We then realized it was a giant’s footprint, I thought we should go but Mia wanted to stay and investigate so I said we could only stay a little longer. Soon after Mia came and told me that it wasn’t a giant's footprint, we had shrunk.

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