Bradley 100WC T3W8
I like exploring around the world and going to places that are forbidden such as fort knox. I’ve always wondered: so, what lies ahead of that vault door? I put a plan into action and disguised myself as a lost tourist asking for directions and sneak around placing miniature sticky bombs all over the place and BOOM! A stash of gold I imagine. Shining left right and centre. Blooming the light out of our solar system! What a sight it would be! But how would I take it? I forgot to mention I’m a professional Burglar. All that gold!
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