Sunday, 17 September 2017

Alice 100WC WK9 T3

There was once a man called Beau McMullen. Everyone thought that he was poor, homeless and nothing interesting ever happened in his life. When he was actually the world’s most wanted thief! He stole valuable jewels that were worth millions of dollars. He geniusly hid the jewels inside a glass cabinet that he stored away in a underground safe. One day Beau went to check on the jewels and discovered that the glass case had been broken and all of the precious jewels were scattered on the concrete floor. Suddenly a tiny man jumped into sight and winked at Beau.

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