I was in town one day going to the new restaurant called JJ and co then I saw a road block for the town parade so I waited for the parade to end but then I saw I a float with a giant light bulb the float was to reduce energy but the bulb consumed a lot of energy too. When it passed by the cables holding the light snapped and fell in the way to my car so I hopped out and then the bulb smashed on my car eww is that what what was in that bulb gross.
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