I was playing golf with my friends one amazing stunning day. We were going to a new hole but with a glimpse of my eye I thought I saw giant man in the forest close by, he had a big face with a grin. I thought I was day dreaming so we kept on playing golf. I hit a golf ball but when it hit the ground I didn't see it. We walked to the ball and we found the ball was stuck in colossal foot print. I was shocked when I saw the giant laughing and sprinting towards me.
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