Monday, 11 September 2017
Izzy 100WC T3W8
I sprint up to my room to grab my jacket, when the window cracks open with a windy whistle. I glance over with a shiver running down my spine and fire burning in my belly. My closet doors creak and my heart ponds heavily. The closet begins to shift with someone obviously inside. I wonder inside my head, so what lies ahead of those mysterious doors. I reach for the handles with worry drowning in my head. I peer through the doors to see my baby sister with a cheeky grin on her face, how could I been so silly!
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