Today all my friends are coming over we are also going to have a nerf battle and we will be building huts as secret bases.
We started off with a bang literally because they had a sniper and shot down one of my players. We shot down one of their players not long after. Then I was aiming at them it was a clear shot then SMASH! I wondered what that noise could have been I poked my head outside the hut; my mum vase filled with mini balls of colour had fallen to the ground and smashed. Whoopsy Daisy!
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