It’s a lovely day today at the golf course Just hitting golf balls far into the distance. Then I saw Dustin Johnson, I couldn't believe my eyes. I followed him when all of a sudden I tripped and fell flat on my face. I stood up to see a big hole in the ground, no wait a minute, it was a foot a bigfoot, no a massive foot. I even took my eyes of Dustin just to see this strange foot in the middle of the golf course. Then I heard some screaming from behind the bush it was Dustin.
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