Monday, 11 September 2017

Sam 100WC T3W8

As dorothy continued her quest to find the Wizard of Oz she heard a strange sound. So Dorothy went over to investigate. After pushing past a few bushes and thorns she found something astonishing…. An old tin man! The Tin Man asked her if she could put some oil in his joints so she did. “Ohh I feel so much better” He shouted in delight “thanks”. “ Where are you going young lady” he asked. “To see the Wizard of oz” Dorothy replied politely. Ohh so thats what lies ahead of the yellow brick road I have been wondering for years!
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  1. Anonymous15 September 2017 at 14:56

    Hi Sam
    I really liked the way you made use of a well known story to build your writing around this week. The prompt fits seamlessly into your writing, which isn't always easy to do.
    Keep up the good work!
    Miss T Team 100wc
    Hampshire, England

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