Wednesday 26 July 2017

🖤 Poppy 100WC T3W1 🖤

I was walking through the town. Everything looked normal when all of a sudden there was a huge BOOM down the road.I went to look at what happened but then went another BOOM. I kept on going to find out that it was the crazy lady and her pet donkey. I asked her what she was doing? She replied “Oh, I'm just testing this new type of ice cream” I replied “Cool! But you're being very loud, so could you try to be a bit quieter?”The lady’s donkey screamed and ran into me.

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