Ahhhhhhhhhh, that was the scream of my last victim. Hello my name is Jack, and I’m in love with evilness. I just love everything about it. When i’m older, I want be the greatest criminal master of all time. Being evil feel’s great and blood rushing. On October 31st I was planning a very gruesome heist, I was going to steal a piece of chocolate from the pantry. I was going towards pantry when all of a sudden I heard the very scary footsteps of my mother walking I saw her stole the cookie and ran. It was a success.
From Ryan Mitchell
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