Monday 24 July 2017
Alice T3WK1 100WC
….when all of a sudden…..
One summer day I was enjoying surfing the huge sparkling waves. I started paddling towards the next wave, when all of a sudden I spotted a peculiar dark figure. Straight away I knew that it was a shark. Soon after, I panicked and paddled away extremely fast, but the shark was a metre away from me. To my horror it took a bite out of my surfboard, the size of a school bag. A rescue boat came quickly to the scene, I tried to ignore pain in my leg as they pulled me up.
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