Air Crash Disaster
Pilot’s have a big job to do flying aeroplanes overseas while they hold many lives in their hands one thing goes wrong and all those lives become in danger.
Hi My name is Lachlan and I’m writing to share my survival story… I was boarding the Boeing 777 all excited, I couldn’t believe that I was going to Beijing. I sat in my seat and we were off! I had a look at the different movies there were but none of them interested me so I went to sleep. When all of a sudden I woke up to plane wreckage.
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