Monday 24 July 2017
Max 100wc T3W1
Jim and his friend Frank went to Rainbow’s end. Jim and Frank decided to go on lots of the rides, but they loved the corkscrew coaster the most so they went on that ride many of times. But at the start they saw the fear fall, so they said “we’ll go on the fear fall last.” While they were at the the fear fall they were the only people in line so they got to go on it straight away when all of a sudden they were already at the top and before they could say anything it dropped quickly.
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