Monday 24 July 2017

Benji 100WC

100 Word Challenge

Jerry, a 14-year-old boy who loves to cycle. One day when cycling with his friends Harry and Frank, they were racing through parks, plazas and small alleys. Frank was the fastest of them and was always at the front he would let Jerry and Harry have a head start so that he could eventually beat them, so Frank is racing through an old alley
when all of a sudden a car pulls out and hits Frank off his bike and sends him sliding down the asphalt. In a quick hurry, Jerry calls an ambulance. Frank recovers soon after

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