I was sitting there looking out the window at the birds having a wonderful day dream when all of a sudden Tessa elbows me shaking me out of my fantasy. I find i'm sitting there in front of my computer with a blank page. “Guys I need a idea to write about.” I explain. Tessa then suggest to right about nothing. I get kind of getting frustrated trying get the point across to her, I can't write about nothing. “Then right about this.” she suggested flapping her arms around. So that's what I did I wrote about that exact moment.
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