I used to live under a bridge, I hated it there because I was always getting sick and cold. I had no house, money, food or blanket, I was lucky enough to get a nibble of an apple. well I lived about 18 years under the bridge but then the flash made me take a wish I closed my eyes and wished I was a billionaire, then I appeared in a awesome mansion worth 1 billion dollars I kept blinking I was flabbergasted I never knew a shooting star would make wishes come true. It was the good old day’s.
Great story, I really liked The story and how the guy lived under a bridge, I think you could go through and check some spelling eg. hatted - hated manchine - mansion
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comment I will
ReplyDeleteI edited the spelling mistakes
ReplyDeleteHi Corbin,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your story.
I found it sad that you spent 18 years living under a bridge. I'm glad your wish came true.
Good work this week.
Mrs Boyce
Cork.
Ireland