Monday 24 July 2017

Connor 100WC T3W1


One day I was baking a nice round chocolate cake. I had mixed the mixture and then I put it into the oven. When there was about 4 minutes left I opened the oven to see how it was going. When all of a sudden there was a very loud bang that gave me a fright and sent me flying back into the side of the bench. The cake had completely exploded and set half of it onto the carpet below the oven. Then I realized that my son had played a trick on me and put a balloon in without me knowing, and this is what happened. I will get him back I thought to myself.

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