Beep!Beep!Beep! I awakened with the longest yawn ever and tried to hit the snooze button on my alarm clock but instead hit a round hairy object and then I soon realised it was Jimmy my labrador he jumped up on my bed and gave me the wake up lick. I got up stopped the alarm and went down the hallway. At the end of it I glimpsed a tall dark object who seemed to be staring at me, Jimmy ran at the object. When all of a sudden I hear a loud bang then ringing and then nothing.
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