I hurried down the streets, wondering which way to turn. Kneeling down so tired from all of the running I did, I find myself in front of a security man. Drifting quietly inside I hear the pitter patter from the rain outside. I take my hat off and pull out my sandwich drizzling with marmalade. My energetic mouth can’t hold it anymore and I need up taking the first bite. The white flames in the sky reflect from the moon into the water below. Shivering I try to keep myself out from the cold. I take a quick power nap ad suddenly my battery is full again.
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