Click, Click.
Today is my first day at the zoo as an employee. I may have the basics down but this is definitely going to be the hardest day of my career.
Swish, Swish.
Firstly I had to feed the female tigers at the south side of the park. It was a short and easy task that shouldn't take too long but in case of emergency, I have to take a taser.
I entered the cage and straight away I knew something wasn't right the Tigers weren't around so I wandered around the cage to check but still nothing so I went back to the entrance and all of a sudden I felt sharp claws dig into me with tons of force. I tried to rip away but the tiger was blocking my escape.
Bang, Bang.
I ran for my life and then my heart stopped.
Wednesday, 6 December 2017
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I really like your story, It had heaps of great descriptive words and It had a great story line.
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