Wednesday 31 May 2017
Matthew
Tom was on his way home after finally completing his writing task that was set by his teacher
MR.Arbuckle.Tom dreaded his new young teacher and was always rude to him.Tom was thinking of some way he could troll his teacher and decided to take a shortcut home . when in the flash of lightning he saw a tall man with a ice hockey mask on and a chainsaw . Tom ran until he was out of breath. By then he was nearly home but it was too late for Tom as the murderer pulled out a gun and shot.
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